I am watching Milo, enjoy the nature. He squints his eyes as the sun's rays get stronger. He sits and enjoys the wind. I look down on the floor and i realize all the shadows. It is like I am in another world. Our shadows create a parallel universe. This was the first time I realized this. The most interesting part of nature were the clouds. I could stare at them all day long. They are like literature. They can be interpreted any way you want. Today, I was happy so every cloud I saw had a positive idea included. Observing nature does take you away from the real world. P.S: Milo opened the gate and ran away, so I had to cut this observation short, but no worries, while I was chasing him, I observed the nature.
Gareen, it is funny how someone actually pays attention to nature when they isolate themselves from technology. For example, the way you related shadows, to a parallel universe. Everybody should spend some time in nature everyday, to see what you saw. Good post, keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteGood work Gar, you were really descriptive and I'm sure everybody else would agree that you appeal to the readers senses. The ending was funny. We need some humor in here. Keep up the good work young lady! :)
ReplyDeleteWow gareen great job. if someone couldve written this any better it would prolly be me. good job again i gotta study for some random ap quiz ill see you tomrow!
ReplyDeleteGreat post as usual Gareen. You made great observations of nature and wrote it in a very distinct descriptive way. The whole blog really got to my senses and it was really easy to grasp. Good job and keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteHello there, Gareen! Great work! I love how you included how each thing that occurred made you feel. "Our shadows create a parallel universe," was a unique and original observation. Good job!
ReplyDeleteGood job, Gareen! I liked how you gave your opinion and your own unique views on all your observations. It seems as though you enjoyed your time in nature. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteGood post Gareen! The way you described nature really facinated me! I also like the way Milo looks at nature with you! Keep it up this is good!
ReplyDeleteYou guessed right Gareen, I do believe a lot of this blog to be exaggerate. I mean, shadows in a parallel universe may be true, but "the clouds are literature"?! You may friend, have lost your marbles. I'm just saying.
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